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    How to Write Headlines That Stop the Scroll

    Maya Brooks
    April 14, 2025
    6 min read
    How to Write Headlines That Stop the Scroll

    Your headline determines whether anyone reads further. In a world of infinite scrolling, this skill is essential.

    Why Headlines Matter

    On average, 8 out of 10 people read headlines, but only 2 out of 10 read the rest. Your headline does most of the selling.

    Headline Formulas That Work

    The How-To "How to [Achieve Desired Outcome] Without [Common Obstacle]"

    The List "7 Ways to [Solve Problem] That [Add Credibility]"

    The Question "Are You Making These [Number] [Topic] Mistakes?"

    The Promise "The Secret to [Desired Outcome] in [Timeframe]"

    The Curiosity Gap "What [Experts] Know About [Topic] That You Don't"

    Best Practices

    Be Specific "Save Money" is weak. "Save $500 on Your Energy Bill" is compelling.

    Use Numbers Numbers attract attention and set expectations.

    Address the Reader "You" and "Your" make headlines personal.

    Create Urgency Time-sensitive language encourages immediate engagement.

    Test Multiple Options Write 10 headlines, pick the best 3, test them.

    Headlines by Platform

    • **Email**: Focus on getting the open
    • **Ads**: Match intent and promise value
    • **Blog**: Optimize for search and clicks
    • **Social**: Encourage engagement

    Invest time in headlines. They're the gateway to everything else you write.

    Maya Brooks

    Marketing Strategist at Sand Bull Media

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